I have looked again at thesis statements for Groups 1-7. The thesis is the most important statement of your presentation, it controls key content and organisation of your ideas. Now some are better, however, some still have not been updated (as called for in homework last Friday, which is not good). To read my updated comments, please go to your DIY WP Preparation Forms.
Groups 8-9, I am sorry, I will check your thesis statements tomorrow.
Best, Owen.
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